IninewCrow@lemmy.ca to Two Sentence Horror@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 7 months agoIt took four or five days.message-squaremessage-square3fedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down18file-text
arrow-up1-4arrow-down1message-squareIt took four or five days.IninewCrow@lemmy.ca to Two Sentence Horror@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · 7 months agomessage-square3fedilinkfile-text
minus-squareSpaceNoodle@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·7 months agoThose are two sentence fragments.
minus-squarethemeatbridge@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·7 months agoIt wouldn’t be if OP deleted the word “Before.”
minus-squareIninewCrow@lemmy.caOPlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·7 months agoNoted … thanks for the feedback … it’s a fun challenge but it’s not as easy as we would like to think to come up with a full fledged idea of a story in two sentences.
Those are two sentence fragments.
It wouldn’t be if OP deleted the word “Before.”
Noted … thanks for the feedback … it’s a fun challenge but it’s not as easy as we would like to think to come up with a full fledged idea of a story in two sentences.